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Angel Bee Member
since 2001-01-30
Posts 176Virginia |
Love Love is what I feel when I look at you You're everyething I want, need, a whole world anew You bring me happiness, and fill my days with glee You are everything to me If this isn't love, my feelings have never been stronger I can't hold this feeling in any longer I've held you back, scared to let you get too close You're different from the rest, not like most It'll have to be a good reason for us to part Because I love you with all my soul, mind, and my heart *~"Sometimes I wish I was a little girl again--because bruised knees heal faster than broken hearts."~* |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Aww, Angel.. this is a very sweet piece. I really liked the rhyme scheme. Very simplie piece, for such a complex feeling... Nice work. I enjoyed this. Best of luck  --Marie |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
This is a beautiful piece.  Love the rhyming. Hope to see more from you!  -Leah Va pensiero sull' ali dorate... |
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scout Member
since 2001-06-16
Posts 175no place owns me |
what a nice poem. reminds me of my old writings. xscoutx |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
sweet and nice...i liked it ...great job!...bye  im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Aww, very nicely done! It sounds as if you are very happy and ~in love~ It feels wondeful when it happens....huh? Jenn "Woah my love, my darling, I've hungered for your touch a long, lonely time"- Unchained Melody |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Angel, seems like you are head over heals over someone. May you both remain strong and love each other forever keep sharing hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Very sweet here. Good luck with the relationship.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Aw Angel- This was such a sweet poem. Very nicely written. |
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angel_2401 Member
since 2001-06-12
Posts 131Cincinnati, OH |
This is beautifully written. I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem. |
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