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SilentSongs
Junior Member

since 2001-05-31

Posts 43
Mist of Time

0 posted 2001-06-03 08:21 PM

Tomorrow I balance religions
placing life in the center of beliefs
which in human dichotomy defy
yet define each other

religion of science
religion of life
somewhere in the center a
tightrope titled I

every bridge is burned
soul pushed back and more
is it worth the price this life
I rent razed both past and future done

all to stand absolutely alone
this melody of me will I think
of you as unnatural sleep is applied
will I linger on the letter promised to be mailed

will I balance mind and heart
maintain my illusion bitter speaking
facade or cry out for you will I be strong
and carry no soul but my own calling none

can I bear should body win the path
I scorched and burned will I awake
healed alive with the torture of said and done
I wonder as tomorrow nears am I still even one

Do I really want the tomorrow I have wrought
have I traded life for living in betraying
my heart my soul my bond
do I want to wake at all

Only tomorrow knows

"The past my prison, confined in solitary voiceless penance."

[This message has been edited by SilentSongs (edited 06-03-2001).]

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2001-06-03 08:24 PM

SilentSongs,

Wow! This is a very powerful piece. It's filled with the hope of the future washed in an air of forgiveness. I love the imagery you used. Great write.

Welcome to Passions! I look forward to seeing you more.

LW

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

2 posted 2001-06-03 08:26 PM

WOW! oh WOW! very good write here,i enjoyed

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

3 posted 2001-06-04 12:18 PM

Oh, this is a great write here! I enjoyed this a lot!

Sauni

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2001-06-04 10:12 AM

the heart of a true poet leaves the reader smiling, pondering, or questioning....

quote:
will I balance mind and heart
maintain my illusion bitter speaking
facade or cry out for you will I be strong
and carry no soul but my own calling none

you do well in all of the above....

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