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Waseem Cheema
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since 2001-03-16
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0 posted 2001-06-15 01:15 PM


This is one of my URDU poem's translation.


FROM THEN..I LOVED YOU

When in the cold and dark nights of the winter
We took the swings of love
From then I loved you
When we met after years, without speaking, silently
While watching each other, through the eyes
All the dreams, all the talks...we told to each other in just a second
From then I loved you
When while lying, in talks
We decorated small, true and liar dreams
From then I loved you
When in little talks, willingly or unwillingly
We became angry, in fabrication
From then I loved you
When, by hiding themselves from home members
We used to talk, one or two talks of heart
From then I loved you
When after hiding themselves from grand mom
We pinched on little and small soft hands
From then I loved you

Now, I do not remember Waseem
From when I loved you

                      ~Wasi~

I love to nice poetry.

© Copyright 2001 Wasee Ashraf Cheema - All Rights Reserved
sodpossom
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1 posted 2001-06-15 01:22 PM


Very well done and beautiful!
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2 posted 2001-06-15 03:37 PM


Wasi~   This is wonderful  
JLR
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3 posted 2001-06-15 03:47 PM


Wasi---You have touched my heart with this!  Beautiful.
Waseem Cheema
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since 2001-03-16
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4 posted 2001-06-15 03:52 PM


Thanks........sodpossom, SEA and JLR.. I love u to u all
Cuddlez
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5 posted 2001-06-15 06:15 PM


Wow, I loved this poem. I hope love truly does conquer time and space as this one suggests!!!

Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.

helen smith
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6 posted 2001-06-15 06:44 PM


so dainty  tender   innocent   and honest waseem ..just like you please share some more
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