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Open Poetry #14
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Cpat Hair
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since 2001-06-05
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0 posted 2001-06-14 11:22 AM


Sun dribbled
Through grey
Clouds and tree
On green water
Pools as paddle
was set.

Rudder or
Back paddle…
Repeat it again…

Each time different
Each time new…

Quietly please…
For the sounds
Of warbler and jay
Mix rightly with
Gurgling stream

Last night
The owls called
And beneath the
Moon dappled diamonds
I heard words

Voices calling me.
Back to water’s edge
And stories told
In undercurrents.
© Copyright 2001 Cpat Hair - All Rights Reserved
Decaflame
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since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635
1 posted 2001-06-14 11:23 AM

and this....literally....gave me goosebumps....
OLIAS
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since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa
2 posted 2001-06-14 11:34 AM

Wonderful images, I got my feet wet. Much enjoyed.

Regards,
Olias.
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