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VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2001-06-12 10:39 PM


Backyard Study
Virginia Salter


shhh. . .
there. . .
look. . . . . .
monarch butterfly
atop cadmium yellow daisy
in metronome swing
as breeze leans it to and fro
in fox trot time


wings beating
syncopated rhyme
as nectar’s sipped
through curved proboscis
unrolling as if midnight’s
noise maker
calling up new year

sunlight glistens
off dew drops
like so much starlight
sparkling day hours

in the distance
honey collector hums
a rhythmic tune
“get a little nectar
sing a little song
busy, busy hours
working all day long”

and we
poised
watching, listening
nature’s concerto
unfolds dressing our eyes
with cleansing moisture

© June 15,  2000

© Copyright 2001 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
Logan
Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641
Arkansas
1 posted 2001-06-12 10:41 PM


This is wonderful, VAS. I observed and chased so many in my grandmothers garden, sigh, well at the expense of some of her flowers also..thank you for the memory...gentle smile
Poeminister
Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada
2 posted 2001-06-14 12:26 PM


Wonderful descriptions Vas, enjoyed this very much.

Poeminister

VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
3 posted 2001-06-14 01:39 AM


Thank you both, very much, and PM you must have had to dig down quite aways to find this one, thank you for your desire to do so.
Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
4 posted 2001-06-15 12:51 PM


Virginia,
this was so stunning in presentation and content.
Write on
Kethry

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life.  Patty Hansen.



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5 posted 2001-06-15 01:01 AM


Extremely colorful, I loved this one.

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