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Sven
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0 posted 2001-06-11 01:40 PM


soul,
world-weary
and
battle-scarred,
fly across
the planes
of time
and
existence
to find
a gentle
haven
in my
love

take rest
now from
the keeper
of this
lonely
inn of
life
and find
that your
trials
are not
in vain

that they
serve
only to
strengthen
you

rest here
for a
moment
or for
an
eternity
here, in
this place,
they
are one
and the
same

but, no
matter
how long
you take
your refuge
here
you will
emerge
as does
the
phoenix
from the
ashes
of her
death

proud
strong
alive

you will
leave this
place
ready
again to
face the
trials
of
life
with power,
wisdom
and knowledge

and
soul,
you will
be
loved

for the
keeper will
know your
name
a name
he
has longed
to hear

the
name
of
love

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

© Copyright 2001 John Garcia - All Rights Reserved
Decaflame
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1 posted 2001-06-11 01:42 PM


Knight, I have sought thee, and find...still the search...continues....

Know that I am aware of the Lady....and she still seeks thy word....

speak to her soon....she awaits.....

ethome
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2 posted 2001-06-11 01:47 PM


Great format and a great write Sven....much enjoyed!

The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up
spaces of consciousness and resistance; to language oppressions; to
re-language historie

Charisma
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3 posted 2001-06-11 02:03 PM


*~*
b
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a
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t
i
f
u
l
*~*
in form and word.
love it.

Charisma


JCGF
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4 posted 2001-06-11 02:12 PM


Oh, Sven.  Very nice indeed.

Hugs,
Tammy

Victoria
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5 posted 2001-06-11 02:32 PM


Lovely indeed Sven..enjoyed  

              ~Victoria~


Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

Pablo Picasso


Auguste
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6 posted 2001-06-11 03:45 PM


This is very nice, Sven.  I also like the way you formatted it for us.

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2001-06-11 04:00 PM


Sven,
Enjoyed the read.

catalinamoon
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8 posted 2001-06-11 04:01 PM


Oh John, this is most beautiful. Someday I would dream of having this kind of love. It is a special person that writes this.
Sandra

Corinne
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9 posted 2001-06-11 04:13 PM


How beautiful, John, like a prayer from above...

corinne

Sven
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10 posted 2001-06-11 06:27 PM


Decaflame, the Lady will need wait no longer, for the Knight has indeed heard her call. . .

ethome, thank you my friend. . .

Charisma, thank you for reading my friend. . .  

Tammy, thank you very much!!

Victoria, thank you, glad that you enjoyed. . .

Michael, I've been having fun with this format. . .it seems to make it look and read in a different way . . . thank you. . .

Sy, thank you. . .

Sandra, I know that we all do. . .and it will happen, for all of us. . . thank you. . .

Corinne, here's hoping that the prayer is answered. . .thank you. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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