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LenMcC1
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since 1999-11-09
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0 posted 2001-06-10 01:04 AM


All In All

Sometimes it is so strange
Laughing everyday
Smiling but you’re not around
You left without a sound to hear

I never thought I would go on
Dreamed of the fun
Dreamed of the nights we spent
Of the advice we lent to our lives

Now I realize who was right
No one but us at the time
But time always ends
Love always turns into friends

Finally I’m at a place
Where I don’t have to chase
Memories of our past
Memories that will always last


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JLR
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since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785

1 posted 2001-06-10 01:15 AM


Love always turns into friends...intriging thought.  Enjoyed.
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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2 posted 2001-06-10 06:39 PM


Oh, JLR picked the line I was going to comment on...what a terrific way to look at things...
ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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3 posted 2001-06-10 06:51 PM


               "Now I realize who was right
                No one but us at the time
                But time always ends
                Love always turns into friends"

Great verse!....Great write!

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