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Open Poetry #14

I do not understand you

JamesBowie
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since 2000-11-25

Posts 252
big old Bangor Maine up by the shack

0 posted 2001-06-05 08:24 PM

Through a set of chicken's teeth
I spit out a dry reply
"I can't love a shell"
even if upon a lovely beach

Coming across unguarded eggs
my tongue flickers wildly
and as I lay to digest
you say you are not satisfied

(bring interpretions with you as I want to see what you think)

Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

1 posted 2001-06-05 08:38 PM

This has quite a bitter sound.

I'm not sure, but am I correct to sense a dissatisfaction on the replies you get?

But then, maybe I got it all wrong.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
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JamesBowie
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since 2000-11-25

Posts 252
big old Bangor Maine up by the shack

2 posted 2001-06-05 08:57 PM

well thanks for responding titia- this was from a dream so whatever interpretation you have may help. Just seems silly to me. J

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2001-06-10 06:49 PM

Do you eat SPAM too? Goodness, I'm glad to know this came from a dream, because my mind was going wild over the read...I thought perhaps you had come into a fortune for finding the ever elusive chicken's teeth....

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