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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Liquidity ~*Marge Tindal*~ The voice of water Falling on the desert sand Joyous sound splashing |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Refreshing, Marge! Well done! |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
loving the water each drop that falls calls my heart please come out and play  |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
A very well done haikuie thingee indeed! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ Perfectly perfect response !  SEA~ Oh ... lovely reply.  Mysteria~ LOL !  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
~*~ desert puddles few cacti flowers holding rain thundering clouds gone ~*~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Thank you for your poetic reply. With just a little rain - the desert comes alive with dance. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Wonderfully refreshing work Regards to you, Marge, Sudhir |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl you do these better than anyone I know, absolutely beautiful first class. Take care love and warm stuff Mushy   Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning [This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 05-21-2001).] |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Excellent haiku. Nicely done. Poeminister "There is no remedy for love but to love more." --Henry David Thoreau [This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 05-21-2001).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
rain clouds scud westward dry desert sand now less parched desert comes alive Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: No matter what form you write in, your poetry never disappoints!! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Marge, I agree with Betty. Michael Proust- |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sudhir~ And here you are again ... thank you. Marsha~ What a lovely thing to say. Thanks for the great picture also. Love you ~ PoeMinister~ Thanks, I like to Haiku ! InterLoper~ Ahhhhhhh ! Lovely, lovely reply. BettyLou~ Shucks ... I try a little of everything. My muses work me overtime ... but I don't mind. Michael~ Pleased to see you in agreement. Thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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