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The Poet's Escape
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The Poet's Escape |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada 
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My time, wistful like, draws on my wishes. My time demands some real closure from my wandering thoughts. I think again for that's what I do when that's where I've been. My wishes rise in fervor at the questions they cost. I welcome the change. My life a motion fanfare brings to me reality pain waiting for a purpose. My steps greet the world. I walk within the boundaries, where the normal scores. And evermore walks those streets from job to home kissing the day good-bye to resting with the window tube where all the sports scores are on. I slide into passions mind open, pen ready to create the wishes fashion. And there lives my muse all juice ready fed, just waiting with a murmuring. There are classics always using the wrenches of destiny once silent read, for each lost muse to write and speak, the chance again to make a mark. No worse for the poet's miracle to lie away from the desire within. Still I, a patron worldly wise who kisses hearts in poetdom, live for the words that dramatize those notes of tender sweet tokens spoken so honestly from everything. The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
quote: Yes! |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Still I, a patron worldly wise who kisses hearts in poetdom, live for the words that dramatize those notes of tender sweet tokens spoken so honestly from everything. Loved the whole thing, but especially this verse, this is a very deep write Et, with lots of meat and I enjoyed it very much. In my library it goes. Thank you. Regards, Olias. |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
Beautiful and evoking. Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Beautiful tribute written with truth and passion. Thank you my friend. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, ethome, all so true, so true, wonderful, thank you...gentle smile |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
refreshing words, very original thought here. Kathleen Blake |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Still I, a patron worldly wise who kisses hearts in poetdom, live for the words that dramatize those notes of tender sweet tokens spoken so honestly from everything. My heart has been kissed by you many times...and thus again, now...thank you! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
I slide into passions mind open, pen ready to create the wishes fashion. And there lives my muse all juice ready fed, just waiting with a murmuring. ***** So true.....so true...yeah I can hear you  ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ETHome~ This is just wonderfully done. It is such a joy to share the thoughts of a poet with other poets, each of us gathering ... *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
What a beautiful way to describe this!  |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
ethome, i have to give this 2 thumbs up definately great..  |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
so very lovely from your pen... Lauren~ *** Nothing Beautiful In This World |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
you've really captured this well my friend. . . great job. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
the chance again to make a mark. No worse for the poet's miracle to lie away from the desire within. Still I, a patron worldly wise who kisses hearts in poetdom, live for the words that dramatize those notes of tender sweet tokens spoken so honestly from everything." ***************** Poetry .... to write poetry is as if to see the words walk and dance seperately from me -------------- You have described it all so eloquently. Thank you ************************* It's only me.......only me |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
beautiful.. i really enjoyed reading this hugs, g the boy said, my name's johnny |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Oh YES, so beautiful and thought prevoking Ethome. wonderful writing......*g* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
There are classics always using the wrenches of destiny once silent read, for each lost muse to write and speak, the chance again to make a mark. No worse for the poet's miracle to lie away from the desire within. Still I, a patron worldly wise who kisses hearts in poetdom, live for the words that dramatize those notes of tender sweet tokens spoken so honestly from everything. =================================== nothing I could say could match the gentle wisdom and truth of poetic soul that lay within those lines .. this is a very cool poem Ebabes... and yet another one for my collection of you  she said I dont know why you ever would lie to me |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Exceptional writing... ethome, as always I am glad to have feasted upon your words... regards, my friend, Sudhir |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done. Capture so much in a few words and explains more than the first read tells.. I enjoyed |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you all so much Lady In White Olias azblond interloper Logan Kathleen Marite Charisma Marge Poet deVine watersign6 Greeneyes Sven My Enchanted_Melody dgvarner Gentle Spirit Janet Marie Sudhir lyer I appreciate your comments so very much. I am just overwhelmed by the response and wish you all the best at your pen and in your every day! The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Cpat Hair you must have been posting while I was writing! Thanks for the kind words! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
ethome, how splendid are your thoughts today, like a summer sun risiing. write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thanks Keth good to hear from you again! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
A very enjoyable read Well spoken is the inspiration that comes from reading others. Wonderful! Liz |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
You are a remarkable man...I cant even begin to tell you....lol...well you know anyways...this is splendiferous |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you so much Elizabeth I can only hope you enjoyed this as much as I enjoy your poetry! Paula you are so kind and I always love to hear from you! |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Ethome, I loved the whole thing from top to bottom, I am so glad I stopped in for a look I would of missed a real treasure, thank you. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you so much for those kind words Cerenity I sure appreciate you taking the time to read this! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Hey there...I KNOW I read this earlier...and I sure thought I replied...lol a blonde moment sugar.....this is wonderful |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thanks Paula...I don't really think it's against the law to read it twice. I sure appreciate the comments my dear poet pal! |
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