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Open Poetry #14

Spires

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2001-06-07 02:34 PM

Silver slender spires
Gathering thoughts to inspire
To lift us higher
In the coolness they’re thrilling,
Beautiful light spilling

Decaying dark spires
Invocation in desires,
Emotion’s fires.
Promise of a fulfilling
Lies begins a quick chilling.

Gloom (Old man in Black)
Inspired by Lady in White

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

1 posted 2001-06-07 02:37 PM

in the cool of thrill
I am left alone to chill
inspire again

lift me in deed then
come and gift me yet again
slender, silver spires

thank you, Prof. Gloom...I am honored...

[This message has been edited by Lady In White (edited 06-07-2001).]

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

2 posted 2001-06-07 02:52 PM

in the cool of thrill
I am left alone to chill
inspire again
Inside the tree’s shadows sway
Watching the glistens in play.

lift me in deed then
come and gift me yet again
slender, silver spires
Reflects the silver dancing
Light to darkness entrancing.

Lady White
Gloom

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

3 posted 2001-06-07 10:01 PM

you 2 are totally amazing me

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

4 posted 2001-06-07 10:38 PM

I can't speak for the Lady,
it's about half hers,
but thank you.

Gloom

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