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The Day Returns
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The Day Returns |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
The Day Returns In the dark of the night pain stirs Heart suffers lonely hours The sun dawns for another day Returning to light a memory astray Sifting through life's corners The pain is put aside for the after The cold of the morning feels the tears A step at a time for there are years Struggles surmounts once a face, a smile Torrents of sorrows, the sky still so high Good to be achieved, boundless fear Regrets forgotten melodies of past love reappear As the winds of time blows a chill, return sorrow The sun sets on another day, where's tomorrow Into the night again, the darkness refills Trembling in tears until the day returns Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful Daniel ... you've captured the power of the emotions that can overwhelm us through the small hours of the night beautifully, well done!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Daniel, Very well put together, as are you for the early morning hours. write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
good to see you again, very lovely writing, Daniel. Kathleen Blake |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Thank you Kit, Kethry, and Kathleen, Sorry for having been away for so long. I was always with Passions. |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
very enjoyable  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JD~ It is so nice to have you back among friends. Missed ya' 'The sun dawns for another day Returning to light a memory astray' Oh, I do know this feeling ~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Daniel, Its good to see you back. Enjoyed the thoughts and flow of this piece. Poeminister [This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 06-07-2001).] |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Such saddness lays within this piece Daniel...may the poetry be the healing touch on your heart~ Excellent writing and expression in this~ |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Where have you been, eh? Missed you and your work. This is exceptional. |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
"The cold of the morning feels the tears A step at a time for there are years" Wonderful haunting words...Thanks for the share! Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind... |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Where ya been sweet friend? This is so sad...hugs to you |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh Daniel this one is so sad and soooo beautiufully expressed...I admire your work and glad to found some of your work today. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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