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Decaflame
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since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

0 posted 2001-06-05 03:14 PM

Residing in a Thought

it is quite easy, this ride I take
day to day, upon the quake
of your thoughts, this opening chasm
I like spending time, where I am

here, now, I play in your thoughts
for just as soon as I you were caught
and you play gently in my mind,
from early morn through night’s cool time

why, I cannot turn that you’re not there
the whiff of you is on the air
the salt of you is on my tongue
with just a thought of you, it’s begun

to make me see, and realize
what it’s like, behind your eyes

Happiness in intelligent people is the rarest thing I know. E. Hemingway

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

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Deep in the heart

1 posted 2001-06-05 03:31 PM

What a wonderful place to live

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth

brian madden
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

2 posted 2001-06-05 04:04 PM

lovely poem, wonderful thoughts

"Build a man a fire, he'll be warm for a day. Set a man on fire and he'll be warm for the rest of his life". Terry Pratchett

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2001-06-05 04:10 PM

(sigh) Ooooohhhh, that is indeed such a wonderful feeling to have to be able to feel how another is feeling, especially the love of your life. (smiles) I've always been trying to learn from others just by looking into their eyes and imagining their life and dreams within. (sigh) You always reside in my thoughts with your beautiful words! You have such a beautiful heart, dear friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

4 posted 2001-06-05 04:44 PM

This is very lovely, Decaflame. You've done well with this one and I love the peaceful feeling it gives.

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

5 posted 2001-06-05 05:03 PM

Wonderful thoughts. I like this muchly.

Poeminister

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

6 posted 2001-06-05 05:19 PM

Yes... to play upon the edges of the senses..intriguing indeed.

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

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British Columbia, Canada

7 posted 2001-06-05 07:23 PM

Oh...I liked how this one made me feel!

Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

8 posted 2001-06-06 07:06 AM

home, sweet home...

This is wonderful writing...

regards to you decaflame,
Sudhir

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

9 posted 2001-06-06 07:21 AM

DecaFlame~
This is quite lovely ...

'you play gently in my mind'

I like that thought - reminds me of sifting through the sandbox of our minds and playing with the memories.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Watersign6
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since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

10 posted 2001-06-06 07:48 AM

enjoyed it oh so much!

Decaflame
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since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

11 posted 2001-06-12 09:33 AM

Thank you for strolling through these little ramblings with me....it's a fun place....

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