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Watersign6
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0 posted 2001-06-05 11:09 AM


just wrote this this morning thanks to the powers
that be and this gift I treasure that has been given to me  

"Let your heart do the talking"
   by:Kelli Kay (c)2001

Let your heart do the talking
and it'll be alright
let your heart do the talking
and guide your pen with delight
to be a poet one must only
listen with their heart
with open ears and a will to write
to spread winged filled words
of truth,love,pride,hope and joy
to others who will read and be inspired
to touch anothers soul is a
great gift indeed
to open ones mind to a world of
new wonder is to plant a seed
let your heart do the talking
and revel in its thunder
for to be a poet one
must truely wonder
about life and everything around
every emotion felt yes,every
noise and the silent sounds
just listen to your heart
and a poetic blessing you will find
for it comes from up above
and is carved in our hearts
with love
a well crafted gift given to us
by a creator devine to nurish
an trust
let your heart do the talking
and it will guide you on your way
let your heart do the talking till
your final resting day

© Copyright 2001 Kelli Kay - All Rights Reserved
VAS
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1 posted 2001-06-05 11:20 AM


wonderful advice trickling throughout this piece.

could use a little spell check, but them, I'm a teacher and the meaning isn't affected by the misspellings as the words are close enough to determine what you mean

Interloper
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Deep in the heart
2 posted 2001-06-05 11:22 AM


Amen.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth


Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2001-06-05 12:40 PM


Watersign6,
I'll give you a double Amen. Enjoyed

Charisma
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4 posted 2001-06-05 01:05 PM


Amen.....

Charisma

Watersign6
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5 posted 2001-06-05 01:23 PM


thank you all for these replies and thank you VAS for the spell check critique,I will
have to check them over better before I post them next time,promise..

walker
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6 posted 2001-06-05 01:45 PM


Lovely and sweetly said straight from the heart!
Lone Wolf
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7 posted 2001-06-05 02:37 PM


You have said a mouthful.  Words to live by here.  Thank you for sharing them.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

catalinamoon
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8 posted 2001-06-05 03:33 PM


This is beautiful. I much enjoyed.
Sandra

wayoutwalt
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9 posted 2001-06-05 03:35 PM


i loved the rhythm and the words wow great job
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10 posted 2001-06-05 04:06 PM


BRAVO!!! CLAPPING WILDLY!!! Yes, may we all let our pens be our swords and in this round table of emotion engrave our words upon the world! (smiles) You indeed possess this enchanting skill and write of all the emotions so very well! (smiles) More please! Amen! You have such a beautiful heart, dear friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Poeminister
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11 posted 2001-06-05 05:06 PM


Excellently said.  Enjoyed the read.

Poeminister

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12 posted 2001-06-05 06:20 PM


A powerful write you've pen'd and to share. One that I will keep, write more!
Titia Geertman
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13 posted 2001-06-05 06:33 PM


WOW    

Like it very much

Titia

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Saunni
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14 posted 2001-06-05 06:48 PM


Wow! You said it better than I ever could! A perfect write if you ask me! Enjoyed!  

Sauni

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

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