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Saunni
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777
West Virginia

0 posted 2001-06-04 11:07 PM


Not In Her Storm

I see the clouds rolling in and oh how it looks like rain
And it is always I fight for the welcome change
When it rains it pours on this heart of mine
So, I take the storms I feel to her each time...

But I know she has lived under her own pouring rain
Yet under her water her heart still doesn't change
She can walk away from what hangs overhead
And, not in her storm, are words left unsaid...

Not in her storm have I ever felt alone
Her storm ends, so I, may find my way home
It's for me that she pushes away her own rain
So, that I may find comfort in calling her name...

She lives in this world for the sake of another's heart
God, how she eases the miles when worlds apart
And she never wanders when your world falls through
Not ever in her storm would she do this to you...

She has wings that I know not only I can see
Cause only an angel could find strength to carry me
It's the way that the eyes can surely view
How her heart's written so clearly in what an angel can do...

Not in her storm is her work ever done
And even in her storm she hands me the sun
When her world is dark- I always have light
And now how I hold the new color of night...

She takes then she gives to an unhappy face
So that many can find an awesome place
I have been able to love her more every day
And with her hand in mine the clouds roll away...

Not in any storm that I will ever live beneath
Could ever change what I hold here inside of me
Not in any of her storms have I lost my angels touch
To that angel out there, I love her so much...

                                                                           Sauni

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

© Copyright 2001 Saundra - All Rights Reserved
SilentSongs
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since 2001-05-31
Posts 43
Mist of Time
1 posted 2001-06-04 11:23 PM


As nice the second time around.

"The past my prison, confined in solitary voiceless penance."

JLR
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since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785

2 posted 2001-06-05 12:20 PM


Well done...Congratulations!
1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace
3 posted 2001-06-05 12:23 PM


CONGRATSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2001-06-05 07:13 AM


Saunni~
Just beautiful the way angels hold our memories for us ...
and bring them to us just when we need most to remember.

'Not in any storm that I will ever live beneath
Could ever change what I hold here inside of me
Not in any of her storms have I lost my angels touch
To that angel out there, I love her so much...'


Lovely, sweet lady.
Congrats on the milestone.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Michael
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California
5 posted 2001-06-05 07:16 AM


I missed this the first time through.  Glad I caught it this time - a very sweet poem.

Congrats on 500.
michael

Watersign6
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since 2001-05-25
Posts 823
Hurricane,WV
6 posted 2001-06-05 07:18 AM


incredible and beautiful,also congratulations

Decaflame
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since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635

7 posted 2001-06-05 08:29 AM


Sauni, a repost with great refrain....well done, and congratulations on your milestone...
Sven
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8 posted 2001-06-05 08:38 PM


I missed this the first time too. . . thanks for sharing it with us again. . . and congratulations!!!



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