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Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

0 posted 2001-05-21 12:23 PM

Nothing

I float, detached, thro' the chilling night
the faintest figure composed of light
dispatch'd from Nature
a phantom to wander
very seldom distinguished by sight

Upon such dripping hours, so dark-so late,
into bowers new or old penetrate,
where souls dreaming sleep
with my vantage seep
streaming in waters under icey fate

Only Sometimes can I gather glow
enough to give perceiveable show
and some will see me there
for a moment aware,
but aye I'm nought again come morrow

Poeminister

[This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 05-21-2001).]

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2001-05-21 12:25 PM

A chilling picture. Joyce

poni
Junior Member

since 2001-05-17

Posts 21
Nebraska

2 posted 2001-05-21 01:33 AM

. . . very haunting. Enjoyed!

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

3 posted 2001-05-21 02:23 AM

Joyce & poni--Thank you both for stopping by to read.

PM

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2001-05-21 04:36 AM

wow, did you test my long-gone college-knowledge with this one...but it's one for my library!!!

Mabel A. Dilley
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

5 posted 2001-05-21 06:36 AM

Oh, yeah!! This held my attention from beginning to end.

"I am not now that which I have been."

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

6 posted 2001-05-21 09:42 AM

This haunt shall flow all the day, and into the night....

well done Sir....

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

7 posted 2001-05-21 09:44 AM

That was something, indeed.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

A Whisper's Caress
Senior Member

since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

8 posted 2001-05-21 11:31 AM

fantastic writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I loved it from start to finish.

May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat...

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

9 posted 2001-05-21 11:32 AM

wow...great read!

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

10 posted 2001-05-21 11:44 AM

haunting, Poe like, olde language well done

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

11 posted 2001-05-23 08:59 PM

~What a fantastic read! Fulfilling. Thank you. *Peace.

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

12 posted 2001-06-06 07:32 AM

WOW! this is terrific,your so talented

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