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PoeticKnight
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0 posted 2001-04-06 04:20 PM


Such is the stuff of beauty
That repairs the tear in my soul
And puts me together
Pieces become whole
Through the stormy weather

I am in need of consolation
Restless yet forever in debt
Because of the desolation
And the sun making me wet

Such is the stuff of beauty
That is a twin within my heart
And I question why,
Why I always fall just short
In your red and watery eye

I am in need of adulation
For I’ve come to find
That true love has no stipulation
When you’re of the same mind

That is more cherished by me
Such is the stuff of beauty


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-04-06 04:27 PM


Ah PK, this is a beautifully penned piece...thank you for this....for it is stormy here, as well!
Janet Marie
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2 posted 2001-04-06 04:28 PM


Such is the stuff of beauty
That is a twin within my heart
And I question why,
Why I always fall just short
In your red and watery eye

I am in need of adulation
For I’ve come to find
That true love has no stipulation
When you’re of the same mind
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Let me know where one can find it other than in poetry ....
outstanding write PK
tis a pleasure to see you so inspired...
even if the mirrors reflections are blinding.

[This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 04-06-2001).]

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3 posted 2001-04-06 04:37 PM


this made my skin tingle..... very nice    SEA
PoeticKnight
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4 posted 2001-04-06 04:57 PM


Skin tingling SEA, woo hoo...*L*
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6 posted 2001-04-06 09:19 PM


wonderful PK. . . you know the heart well my friend. . .

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Lone Wolf
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7 posted 2001-04-06 11:50 PM


I think this poem was the stuff of beauty.  Wonderful!  

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by the grace of God.
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