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bslicker
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state of mind

0 posted 2001-04-05 01:56 AM


I sit here trying to think, why
But all i can do is wait and cry.

At your ever mercy so much,
Hoping to have your very touch.

Have no way to get a hold of you,
So I sit here feeling all blue.

Hoping that you IM me,
Cause we know that talking is the key.

Telling the world that your moving back in,
Knowing that our love will win.

Showing you, that you are still the one,
Cause you are my sunshine from the sun.

Bernie

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1 posted 2001-04-05 09:39 AM


Bernie~ I hope all works out.....this is very touching    SEA
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2 posted 2001-04-05 09:42 AM


"Moving forward......Moving home.... "
The title says it all.

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3 posted 2001-04-05 09:56 AM


The the communication moving....that is all you can do....
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4 posted 2001-04-05 12:20 PM


Touching  
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5 posted 2001-04-05 12:26 PM


Good luck!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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6 posted 2001-04-05 01:48 PM


Bernie...this was just SO sweet and sincere.
Hope everything works out for the best!

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7 posted 2001-04-05 02:09 PM


I also hope that things work out....a wonderful write!

Nathan

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8 posted 2001-04-05 04:10 PM


sincere and sad...but the hope is still there
well done poet sir...
yes communication is the key ...even when written.
take care
jm

It's such a clever innocence with which you show myself to me
As if you know how it feels to never be who you wanted to be
~jackson browne~

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9 posted 2001-04-05 04:33 PM


hope it goes well yuh
bslicker
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10 posted 2001-04-05 04:57 PM


Thank you all for all your best wishes, was going to wait until 1slick_lady replied, but as you all can see she replied in a poem.......
Once again thank you all from both of us. Here is Helen's reply poem. /pip/Forum47/HTML/000885.html
Bernie
A   a day keeps the world   'g.


Bernie Slicker

[This message has been edited by bslicker (edited 04-05-2001).]

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11 posted 2001-04-18 04:50 PM


A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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