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To try once more
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To try once more |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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To try once more I have spent half of my life with you I still love you, yes, this is true things somehow got off track alot has changed we won't get back just work on things that cause a heart to break and stop all, that one can not take when I dance you know the steps when tears fell you knew why I wept have to stop this who's to blame all it does is fan the flame remembering when we were best friends and can come to that place again to show me just where I stand freedom in love, not command on saturday my clothes and I will be outside together once more side by side to try once more is a must as again I reach my hand in TRUST [This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (edited 04-05-2001).] |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
you can only trust yourself then again you never know what you might do.... nice nice write |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
If only we all had more chances. Very well written! |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
I agree that it can we can do it till the end, I know that we can be best friends. Try to talk to you last night, Couldn't get you to bite. Today the IM source site is down, By tomorrow night we will do the town. I can not wait to hold you again, Cause we together can break the trend. In my poem i have told the world we would try, I promise to you that is not a lie. Bernie Call a pay phone will do. A  a day keeps the world 'g.I like your reply to my poem.. /pip/Forum47/HTML/000844.html Bernie Slicker [This message has been edited by bslicker (edited 04-05-2001).] |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
with all you've said, I have heard I now put my TRUST in your word and this is what I shall do I shall grow old along with you... the phone line is dead where I am will try to contact you if I can if not, do not dispair (saturday) I will be there dont forget my puter is dead just keep in mind what I said on saturday I WILL be there to start again, a time to share I have to go for now will try to contact you somehow if not I'll be there on saturday NOTHING will get in my way |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
Cute, I love the way your trying but also indeciveness shows... Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
hopefully. . . it will be held. . . this time. . . good luck helen. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smiles to you....perfect love, perfect trust... and again I say, everything happens for a reason---much luck to the two of you! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Bold move . . . good luck to you. All writing comes |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Here's wishing you all the best, Lady. Something for you in Open at: /pip/Forum47/HTML/000916.htm /:-}== |
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