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Brad Majors
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0 posted 2001-04-04 06:45 PM



Blasphemy runs like
blood over a plastic crucifix
onto Swaggert's secret stash
of Hustlers
"I have sinned:
yet belittle the sheep
for following the shepard
alterboys in father Brian's
"private" chambers
paying penance
for lost innosense
as the staue of Jesus
drips another tear of
blood
before crashing on the floor
below
unheard beneath the droning noise
of mindless ritual
except the old mexican Janitor
who cleans up the pieces
and puts up a new one in its
place
walking away cursing in spanish
about cheap Japanese
sacred merchandise.

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1 posted 2001-04-04 06:47 PM


Not sure about this one, but the ending made me laugh...if it wasn't supposed to, I'm so sorry    SEA
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2 posted 2001-04-04 06:48 PM


What a creative mind ...

Let's see some more...

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Brad Majors
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3 posted 2001-04-04 06:50 PM


lol its a satirical look at the hypocrisy is the church today, so laughing would be fine   Thanks!
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4 posted 2001-04-04 07:15 PM


Brad, You cleverly expressed that hypcrisy well...with tongue in cheek humor..hehe..I enjoyed it..but then I have that Scottish sarcastic sense of humor. hehehe
good job!

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I'm so glad I didn't make you mad.....
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6 posted 2001-04-04 07:23 PM


Like this one...James
Brad Majors
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7 posted 2001-04-04 07:28 PM


This is a great place. I have to warn you that my poems can be strange from time to time.
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8 posted 2001-04-05 07:59 AM


Brad...welcome to Passions...
I have been treating myself to several samplings of your work, and you write with a fresh and creative style...
and write well on many subject and themes.
I enjoyed the wit and sarcastic edge to this.
nice to have you here with us,
your enthusiasim for poetry is evident in your replies as well  

It's such a clever innocence with which you show myself to me
As if you know how it feels to never be who you wanted to be
~jackson browne~

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9 posted 2001-04-05 08:11 AM


Heh.

Hypocrisy - it's in most every facet of life - and organised religion is no exception..

well done

K

All obscurity starts with a danger:
Your dangers are many. I
Cannot look much but your form suffers
Some strange injury
Sylvia Plath

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