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PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

0 posted 2001-04-04 05:40 PM

Why the Gods are against us
I’ll never know
But there is a power far greater
Than any kind of control
And it decides to let it show
As the starlight in your eyes

To usurp the authority of nature’s law
That is the key
To a struggling, fragile thing
Just yearning to be
In different phases, you and me
As the starlight in your eyes

Such a contrast between light and dark
The only dream
Of which passes for reality
In time, or so it seems,
I feel like such a distant dream
As the starlight in your eyes

Why is it that fate conspired to bring
To us tonight
A certain feeling of timelessness
Of magnified sight
And a gleam of unquenchable light
As the starlight in your eyes

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

1 posted 2001-04-04 05:42 PM

Well done.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

2 posted 2001-04-04 05:47 PM

Thanks Interloper.
Pardon my French. *L*

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2001-04-04 05:55 PM

This reads very much like a soft song...so much so, I heard the music...

well done, PK....

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2001-04-04 06:05 PM

PK~ ummmm, yes, like a song........I heard it too.....

Lady Ollyne
Member

since 2001-01-08

Posts 337
East Coast

5 posted 2001-04-04 07:00 PM

Vos mots peuvent allumer n'importe qui des yeux, Chevalier Poetique

Merci,
Madame Ollyne

"O, learn to read what silent love hath writ:
To hear with eyes belongs to love's fine wit"...Shakespeare

Lady Ollyne
Member

since 2001-01-08

Posts 337
East Coast

6 posted 2001-04-04 07:00 PM

Vos mots peuvent allumer n'importe qui des yeux, Chevalier Poetique

Merci,
Madame Ollyne

"O, learn to read what silent love hath writ:
To hear with eyes belongs to love's fine wit"...Shakespeare

Lady Ollyne
Member

since 2001-01-08

Posts 337
East Coast

7 posted 2001-04-04 07:00 PM

Vos mots peuvent allumer n'importe qui des yeux, Chevalier Poetique

Merci,
Madame Ollyne

"O, learn to read what silent love hath writ:
To hear with eyes belongs to love's fine wit"...Shakespeare

Lady Ollyne
Member

since 2001-01-08

Posts 337
East Coast

8 posted 2001-04-04 07:00 PM

Vos mots peuvent allumer n'importe qui des yeux, Chevalier Poetique

Merci,
Madame Ollyne

"O, learn to read what silent love hath writ:
To hear with eyes belongs to love's fine wit"...Shakespeare

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

9 posted 2001-04-04 07:08 PM

So beautiful and such amazing imagery. I really couldn't find anything wrong with it. I love the unique perspective you took!

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

10 posted 2001-04-04 07:16 PM

sûrement les yeux que vous regardez le remplissage de volonté avec plus que lumiere d'etoile. . . puits fait Chevalier Poetique. . .

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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2001-04-04 07:22 PM

Enjoyable to read. James

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

12 posted 2001-04-04 07:43 PM

I love french!!!!!!

PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

13 posted 2001-04-05 09:16 AM

And French kissing too...oops, i started something here *S*.

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