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S Arthur Grey
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woven by a poet's loom

0 posted 2001-04-01 08:11 PM


Hi-Coo

Hi-Coo said the dove
sitting on a mourning wire
It's April Fool's Day!




S Arthur

Whose Night is this, Mine or the Moon's?
J.E.James

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1 posted 2001-04-01 08:22 PM


SArthur~

Well, Hi-Coo to you !
Enlightened play on phrases
Senryu you do !

*Fun !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Denise
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2 posted 2001-04-01 08:25 PM


Sooooo cute!
JLR
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3 posted 2001-04-01 08:30 PM


Clever!
SpitFire
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4 posted 2001-04-01 08:32 PM


~Aah, enjoyed this! *Peace.
Nan
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5 posted 2001-04-01 09:12 PM


The dawn of April
Warms the earth and March's past
Tulips May blossom

Waft every crest upon your destined sea.
Embrace the Wave of Serendipity,
Lest its elusive arcane ecstasy
Refurl with sail for all eternity.
    

Lone Wolf
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6 posted 2001-04-01 09:14 PM


Nicely done!

Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

Meadowmuse
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7 posted 2001-04-01 09:41 PM


Curious, clever, timely ~ I enjoyed this!

Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau


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