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Open Poetry #13

Untwisting the truth

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-03-29 04:56 PM

Untwisting the truth

funny how things get twisted behind closed doors
keeping secrets that are only yours
and how you lessen all your lies
to live a life behind a thin desquise
soon all your secrets will be revealed
coming from places long been sealed
are you truly who you say
a time will come when threads will fray
finding things locked within the proof
of what are lies and what is the truth

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-03-29 05:10 PM

someone is pulling the one thread that held this all together....

well done!

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2001-03-29 06:02 PM

Enjoyed reading your poem...James

Mabel A. Dilley
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since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

3 posted 2001-03-29 06:07 PM

Things hidden certainly have a way of surfacing. Best not to keep most things "secret". Enjoyed the ease of your rhyme and rhythm.

"I am not now that which I have been."

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

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East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-03-29 08:50 PM

excellent words helen. . .

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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

5 posted 2001-03-29 08:58 PM

Hidden things do seem to have a way of coming back don't they? This was really good 1slick.....

Enjoy life...this is NOT a dress rehearsal. *s*

S Arthur Grey
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom

6 posted 2001-04-01 09:21 PM

I've read this several times, 1slick_lady, and it seems to 'ear better each time. Rather well done.
Now, to find the key . . .

S Arthur

Whose Night is this, Mine or the Moon's?
J.E.James

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