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Open Poetry #13

Reborn--A Haiku

kitkat
Senior Member

since 2000-01-11

Posts 878
Nova Scotia

0 posted 2001-03-31 11:13 AM

escaping dark sleep
yearning to kiss the sunlight
spring flowers reborn

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You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face
and show the world all the love in your heart
Then people are gonna treat

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

1 posted 2001-03-31 11:38 AM

Fantastic!!! Probably a senyru instead of an haiku, but it is a beautiful piece about the yearning for spring.

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

2 posted 2001-03-31 11:41 AM

liked this too...very charming little piece...

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-04-02 11:40 PM

I love this!!!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

4 posted 2001-04-02 11:46 PM

excellent!!!

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

5 posted 2001-04-02 11:51 PM

A wonderful haiku to welcome spring!

Take care,
Melissa~

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2001-04-03 03:10 AM

KitKat~
Just lovely !
Always good to see your smile !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

7 posted 2001-04-04 06:40 PM

Well Done!. A true haiku.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

8 posted 2001-04-04 06:42 PM

ah yes. . . wonderful!!!

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

kitkat
Senior Member

since 2000-01-11

Posts 878
Nova Scotia

9 posted 2001-04-05 09:51 AM

Thank you for your replies. Spring to me is rebirth of everything colorful and new. Nothing like this after a cold harsh winter to make you feel alive and vibrant.

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