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Sven
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0 posted 2001-05-16 01:58 PM


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she
gathers
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back
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hearts

and
our
souls

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.



[This message has been edited by Sven (edited 05-16-2001).]

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jellybeans
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1 posted 2001-05-16 02:34 PM


very very nice.....great presentation  
Amature2
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2 posted 2001-05-16 02:52 PM


Sven, very well expressed. 1slick_lady is a great addition to the Passions Gallery.  

[This message has been edited by Amature2 (edited 05-16-2001).]

Decaflame
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3 posted 2001-05-16 03:21 PM


She will enjoy this much, Sven, just as we all will.  You keep adding to that Gallery...we enjoy your efforts so very much!
Irish Rose
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4 posted 2001-05-16 03:50 PM


Helen is a wonderful part of Passions, and a gifted poet...

Kathleen

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


JLR
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5 posted 2001-05-16 11:18 PM


Applause!
1slick_lady
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6 posted 2001-05-17 01:28 AM


Sven......i am very touched by this.....thank you & thank you for putting me in the passions gallery........i am honored...smooch......helen

"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet)       Shakespeare


Sven
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7 posted 2001-05-17 09:42 PM


jb, thank you. . . glad that you enjoyed. . .

A2, thank you. . . and she is indeed a great addition. . .  

Decaflame, thank you for reading. . . I will indeed keep adding, as long as you keep enjoying!!

Kathleen, indeed she is. . . I've always enjoyed her writing. . . thank you. . .  

JLR, *bowing* Thank you!!!

helen, the honor is all mine. . . it has been wonderful to read your work from the day you arrived. . . and not just me. . . your work touches many. . . thank you for sharing them with us, and we hope that you'll be with us for a long time. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

anonymous albert ?
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8 posted 2001-05-18 01:06 PM


i enjoyed this read greatly...by the way you wrote it was very nice...it gave the poem that feeling no one else can...well maybe more ...but yea...beauitful work once again...sven

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

Temptress
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9 posted 2001-05-24 04:50 AM


I am slowly but surely cathing up on these, Sven.   LOL! As once before, I fell behind in reading.   I love the style you use in your work. You are indeed a Beautiful Heart.  

passing shadows
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10 posted 2004-06-01 12:23 PM


beautiful
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