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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Feelings Alone in a crowd, I succumb to your thoughts, questioning always my senses of real or imagining I, of the dancing of dreams. But Oh! How I feel, what I feel, when I feel. I see you in faces of strangers, each look. I touch you, in warmth of their breezes that steal. Imagining I, you are there, always there. And Oh! How I feel, what I feel, when I feel. Alone in a crowd, watching all those on leave, following closely, my thoughts I conceal. Outlining those, as they blindly walk past I look for your presence, imagining real. At days end my dreaming of dancing reveals A nighttime of feeling, those feelings I feel. ~Wynter...in a feeling mood *s "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 03-28-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Wynter~ Just a lovely, lovely thought !  'But Oh! How I feel, what I feel, when I feel.' Ahhhh ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thanks Marge..am on a feeling high today..am about to go interviewing for a job.....this is the new beginning...finally I am able to make that move  huggzz ~Wynter/Maureen "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Good luck on the job Wynter. "And Oh! How I feel, what I feel, when I feel" That line gets me... |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Wynter~ this is fantastic!! " I see you in faces of strangers, each look. I touch you, in warmth of their breezes that steal. Imagining I, you are there, always there. And Oh! How I feel, what I feel, when I feel."  SEA |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Let the music begin Wynter!!!! wonderful. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Poetic Knight that line was what I was feeling (thought it might be too trivial but I guess it worked...) SEA I do feel strongly about things thanksSven What would the world be without music to dance our hearts...thank you ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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