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kat
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0 posted 2001-04-08 07:50 PM


Let go my heart

So gentle your touch
Of illicit love
Entrenched in a fantasy
True love from above?

Hearts so consumed
In desire’s fire
Love clothed beautifully
In lust's black attire

To find that key
That you so behold
Entrapped, my heart
Is this lust you’ve sold?

Forsaking my feelings
Abandoning the scene
Loveless tears glitter
Real love not seen

Illusions of love
Lust in disguise
Struggling to let go
My heart tries


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Lone Wolf
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1 posted 2001-04-08 10:29 PM


An awful ache emits from these words . . . ouch . . . great expression, Kat.  

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by the grace of God.
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2 posted 2001-04-09 07:17 PM


it is hard. . . but if you must, you must. . .

excellent. . .

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3 posted 2001-04-09 07:18 PM


Letting go is so hard to do. Very good expression of this impossible situation.  
Saunni
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4 posted 2001-04-09 07:35 PM


Yes it is so very hard, but sometimes is the only way to go. Though it is sad, it's a very good write.  

Sauni

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insect
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5 posted 2001-04-09 11:59 PM


Can I offer a bug-hug!
Dakota
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6 posted 2001-04-17 05:18 PM


I FEEL YOUR PAIN
OF LOVE UNTOLD
OF TIMES REFRAIN
CAN BE SO COLD

LOVE IS NOT LUST
THIS COULD NOT BE
LOVE IS IN TRUST
ONLY THE HEART CAN SEE

TIME IS CRUEL
IN IT'S PLANNING OF LIVES
ONE CLEAR FUTURE
IS ALL THAT CAN SURVIVE

WE HOPE FOR A MIRACLE
FOR OUR HEARTS ON FIRE
WAITING FOR THE MIRACLE
TO FULLFILL THE DESIRE

THE MIRACLE FLEES
FROM OUR HEARTS GRASP
LIKE THE LEAVES FROM THE TREES
LIKE HOLDING THE PAST

WE MUST LIVE OUR LIVES
THROUGH ALL THIS TORMENT
FOR ETERNITY COMES SOON
FOR LIFE IS BUT A MOMENT

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