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RMW
Senior Member

since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

0 posted 2001-04-15 11:58 PM

Among the Crow

Spring gallops on the Yellowstone.
Clouds hunt close packed,
And in the distance
Feathered shafts
Slant deep into the thunderous hills.
Freshets spill across a plain,
And for a season
Grass extends
Like the mane of a pony
Runinng towards the horizon.

RMW

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2001-04-16 07:47 AM

And in the distance
Feathered shafts
Slant deep into the thunderous hills.
Freshets spill across a plain,
And for a season
Grass extends
Like the mane of a pony
Runinng towards the horizon.
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superb imagery here...
clever and unique images and phrases...
wonderful employ of elemental metaphor as well.
this is a very cool poem
very well done poet

In another life...I know I loved you then
Lightning strikes twice...we're destined again.
We dont have to make promises...we were always meant to be

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2001-04-16 07:02 PM

excellent Bob. . .

I really like the way that this paints that picture. . .

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Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2001-04-16 07:08 PM

"And for a season
Grass extends
Like the mane of a pony
Runinng towards the horizon."

Wonderfully descriptive RMW! You imagery is so vivid, and paints a perfect picture in my mind's eye, very well done!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

4 posted 2001-04-16 07:20 PM

Gorgeous! Completely breathtaking!

Cor

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

5 posted 2001-04-17 04:02 PM

Very well done... I enjoyed this! *S*

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

6 posted 2001-04-17 04:12 PM

Excellent imagery of a wonderful nation!

RMW
Senior Member

since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

7 posted 2001-04-17 05:12 PM

Folks...As my computer is not showing several of the replies, let me simply say, thank you all most kindly. Bob

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