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S Arthur Grey
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since 2001-03-19

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woven by a poet's loom

0 posted 2001-03-27 10:55 PM

The Fun

She loves
To sit around
Contemplate her navel
And wait for someone to join in
The fun.



                             S Arthur Grey
                                3.27.01

[This message has been edited by S Arthur Grey (edited 03-28-2001).]

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

1 posted 2001-03-27 11:19 PM

Sound like one wild and crazy kind of gal! This was very true to form and entertaining too.

JamesBowie
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since 2000-11-25

Posts 252
big old Bangor Maine up by the shack

2 posted 2001-03-27 11:28 PM

sounds like my saturday night except throw a few kids in there

S Arthur Grey
Senior Member

since 2001-03-19

Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom

3 posted 2001-03-28 12:34 PM

Mysteria,
James,

Thanks for stopping by.
This is fun little form to "play" with.
Glad you enjoyed.

S Arthur

Whose Night is this, Mine or the Moon's?
J.E.James

Jamie
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since 2000-06-26

Posts 3168
Blue Heaven

4 posted 2001-03-28 12:39 PM

wonder
If I'm alone
as I sit and wonder
is it an innie or outtie
do tell

sorry couldn't resist..lol

S Arthur Grey
Senior Member

since 2001-03-19

Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom

5 posted 2001-03-28 12:55 PM

Jamie,

In fact
it is neither
It seems it was fixed once
So was it innie or outtie?
Can't tell.

S Arthur

Whose Night is this, Mine or the Moon's?
J.E.James

Nan

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since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

6 posted 2001-03-28 09:08 PM

In, out, around and through - Cute..

Marina
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since 2000-02-10

Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario

7 posted 2001-03-28 09:17 PM

I found it! This is an excellent example of a Cinquain. Great job!

Marina

It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

8 posted 2001-03-28 09:18 PM

the mirror
reflects the lines
and she wonders
if it is time to shed
the mirror

I enjoyed....

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

9 posted 2001-03-29 09:21 AM

this is a neat style of writing, I think I'll give it a shot one of these days.....enjoyed

SEA

S Arthur Grey
Senior Member

since 2001-03-19

Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom

10 posted 2001-03-31 12:49 PM

Nan
Marina
Sunshine
SEA

Thanks all for the read, glad you enjoyed!

S Arthur

Whose Night is this, Mine or the Moon's?
J.E.James

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

11 posted 2001-03-31 11:24 AM

this gave me a chuckle...

write on!!

VAS
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since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

12 posted 2001-03-31 11:25 AM

Heh=heh=heh! What a picture, having more than one person contemplating the same navel.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

13 posted 2001-04-04 07:50 PM

all these Cinquains I'm going to try another as I've only written one.

S Arthur Grey
Senior Member

since 2001-03-19

Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom

14 posted 2001-04-05 12:39 PM

faterider,
VAS,
Rose,
Thanks for stopping by for a chuckle.

Rose -- looking forward to your cinquains, and you don't have to join the minimalists' club to do 'em.

S Arthur

Whose Night is this, Mine or the Moon's?
J.E.James

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