Too Much Thought (is it the constant seriousness of mood?)

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Open Poetry #13

Too Much Thought (is it the constant seriousness of mood?)

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

0 posted 2001-04-21 05:52 PM

In seriousness I am somber,
Mood to mood,
Grievances and happiness, ponder.
Awakened nerves soul to spirit,
Flight above a cloud,
Should never learn to fear it.
So, I'm awash on shores,
Fear of drowning,
Fated open minded thought pores.

Perhaps I'm forcing this matter,
Paintbrush of my artist,
Wordless in its thoughts,
Page by page, arranged in spatter.

still d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d
I am bound by this, you see...to become Night's sole mistress, and I am jealous in my endeavours for his attention.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-04-21 06:00 PM

                   "Paintbrush of my artist,
                    Wordless in its thoughts,
                    Page by page, arranged in spatter."

I loved this part.....and your new picture is beautiful.....not that the other one wasn't, but I like this one

SEA

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2001-04-21 06:56 PM

perhaps. . . but sometimes, it has to come out. . .

excellent. . .

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Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

3 posted 2001-04-23 02:30 AM

Sometimes its hard to pen what we feel. Good job on this one!

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

4 posted 2001-04-23 02:38 AM

Perhaps you are forcing the matter, yet, this is a creation within itself. I can relate to your mind wandering over all the avenues of thought! You put it on the page where many will agree...it's a good write!

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