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Tiptoeing You
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Tiptoeing You ~*Marge Tindal*~ I tiptoed the perimeter of you thinking I wouldn't fall in Maintaining my balance without wanting to budge Knowing I'd be a goner if you should nudge Whoops ! over the edge I've fallen c a t c h me ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Coal Surrender Member
since 2001-04-01
Posts 84U.S. |
Delightful, in both presentation and theme, absolutely charming. Coal |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Coal~ Thank you for the early morning read. Glad you enjoyed it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Mornin' Marge I love this poem... It's a cute one... Who knows - Maybe the fall will be the experience of a lifetime...  p.s.- I'm on my friend's WebTV - I have no email access, so I'm pretty much incommunicado here... I really wish there was a way to work out the semantics of our having different times available here. It's not looking promising, I'm afraid... and needless to say - I'm a bit wiped out from yesterday's venture... You have any new possibilities?... Can we tell your boss this is a mandatory trip for you???... I wanna meet you!!!!....  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marge, how delightful! NAN....having a good time? |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
 YEP..!!![This message has been edited by Nan (edited 04-17-2001).] |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
Truly exceptional, the layout and content of the poem make it a delightful read and I hope to see many more poems from you! This one was a pleasure to read. Truly appreciative ^*~Kicking Kim~*^ |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Delightful! |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--I love this...if you hadn't fallen, someone like me would have pushed you. (Nan....I want a trip!) |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge~I loved this  very nice SEA |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
SPLAT!Oooooops! *G* Sorry, Marge... I just wanted the company... and my falling had a rough landing! LOL. This is great... I love the title... love the poem! *S* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nan~  Oh, yeah ... like my boss has a heart or something !  He's in West Palm Beach and I'm Marge-In-Charge !  Darn it ... me too ! Can't work it out this trip, kiddo ! Guess you'll just have to COME BACK !  Did we order up gorgeous weather for you, or what ? Karilea~ Thanks. Nan says YEP !!! KickingKim~ Thank you and welcome to Passions. SongBird~ Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Martie~ Thanks, gal ! Nan says, YEP !!! SEA~ Thank you, hon. SuthernGal~ You ARE a TRIP !!! YEP !!! Love n' hugs to all~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
I wouldn't have walked anywhere near that perimeter if some part of me didn't want to fall in! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JLR~ Me either !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Exquisite, Marge. Completely you..and I completely love it. still d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
MARGE..i love love love this! hugs, g time makes us bolder..even children get older..and i'm gettin' older too... |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
what a beautiful way to say it.... emjoyed...Lauren~ *** "Within you I lose myself |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
golly - you are so much fun: "catch me". - I suspect I'd need tiptoe about you as well |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Temptress~ Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it. DG~ So pleased you liked it. GreenEyes~ I like that you liked it ! Wilfred~ Arms open wide ? ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Hi Marge, been away for a while, but your poetry still has the magic. Very well written. Thanks. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Gemini~ Thanks, hon. Hope you're back to stay for a while. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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