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PoemCrazy
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0 posted 2001-04-19 03:42 PM



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i want to learn every inch of you.
wrap you in my perception,
and map the spots that put fire in your eyes,
or reduce you to sighs.
silently panting and gasping for air.

harmonize,
sensualize,
stare into your eyes.

stimulate your every sense,
up, up, over the fence,
until you can't take anymore and beg me to stop.
no. no. don't. stop.

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Deep in the heart
1 posted 2001-04-19 04:07 PM


Hmmmmmm?  well done.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


Janet Marie
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2 posted 2001-04-19 04:19 PM


i want to learn every inch of you.
wrap you in my perception,
and map the spots that put fire in your eyes,
or reduce you to sighs.
silently panting and gasping for air.

harmonize,
sensualize,
stare into your eyes.
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OH YES!!!
what a very very cool poem

"wrap you in my perception,
and map the spots that put fire in your eyes,"

whew ... have mercy  
awesome poem PC.

I love your imperfections ... I love your everything ...
Your broken heart ... your broken wings.


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