The nightingale's song ... Haiku

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The nightingale's song ... Haiku

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-04-16 10:26 AM

the nightingale’s song
ushers in the dusky night
heralding darkness

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 04-17-2001).]

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-04-16 10:42 AM

You, sir, are on a delightful road today, leaving beautiful thoughts behind like bread crumbs....

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-04-16 11:02 AM

this is wonderful

SEA

helen smith
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since 2001-03-12

Posts 240

3 posted 2001-04-16 05:49 PM

subarashi desu..interloper-san

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

4 posted 2001-04-16 07:16 PM

Sunshine ~ Ah, you have discovered honorable plan

SEA ~ Thank you little mermaid

Helen Smith ~ Domo aragato.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Passions Voice
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since 2000-10-23

Posts 291
Michigan

5 posted 2001-04-16 08:05 PM

sigh, I can almost hear it.

This is wonderful.

passion is life. . . ~Diana

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

6 posted 2001-04-16 08:14 PM

Perfectly penned Interloper ... very nicely written!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2001-04-16 09:40 PM

InterLoper~
No lovelier sound~
No lovelier Haiku~
So Softly sung~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

8 posted 2001-04-16 10:01 PM

Thi is good....actually better than good. I really enjoyed it.

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

9 posted 2001-04-16 10:47 PM

Such a lovely haiku!

Take care,
Melissa~

BrightStar
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since 2001-04-08

Posts 219

10 posted 2001-04-18 10:54 AM

Nice work.

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