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Brad Majors
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0 posted 2001-04-10 05:19 PM



Quiet whispers fill the night air
telling of new love
which blossomed in the spring
now binds two lovers
as they share a kiss
on a old bridge under starlit sky.

As they kiss
the night comes alive
with the chorus
of crickets and songbirds.

Even the stars seem brighter
which are dim in comparison
to the sparkle in these
lover's eyes.

As the sun threatens to end
this special moment
he take out a ring
and slips it on her finger.

Nothing is said
she nods her head
he smiles
they kiss and hold each other
as the sun rises.


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1 posted 2001-04-10 05:21 PM


Sunsets, sunrises, whispers....you managed to encompass all that I like...

and formed a circle...

well done Brad!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




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2 posted 2001-04-10 05:24 PM


thank you!
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3 posted 2001-04-10 05:25 PM


Mush stuff ;-)

Well done my friend.  Just keep on keepin' on so we may enjoy you all the more.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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4 posted 2001-04-10 05:35 PM


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5 posted 2001-04-10 05:40 PM


Preciously romantic!
Brad Majors
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6 posted 2001-04-10 05:53 PM


Thank you for your kindness!  
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7 posted 2001-04-10 07:04 PM


Absolutely beautiful, Brad!  I definitely have to keep this one!  I love it!

sp  

to be with you...
I've tried to hide my passion,
but it's just no use...
piece by piece I lose it
when you walk into the room...

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8 posted 2001-04-10 07:38 PM


Oh Brad this is wonderful..I am a die hard romantic and this is great.
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9 posted 2001-04-10 08:02 PM


Hopelessly romantic . . . I love it!!  

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by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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10 posted 2001-04-10 08:16 PM


You have a talent for telling a story and painting a picture don'tcha? I like it! A lot! Well done Brad...thanks for sharing  
~Becky~

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11 posted 2001-04-10 08:18 PM


Very romantic poem.  Joyce
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12 posted 2001-04-10 11:34 PM


Thank you  
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13 posted 2001-04-11 01:40 AM


Brad,

Romantic, lovely imagery.  Excellent write.  I much enjoyed this.  Thanks

Michael

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"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

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14 posted 2001-04-11 01:52 AM


You captured a moment in time that can not be duplicated.  Wonderful job on this.  I loved it.

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