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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! 
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Something isn't right got to put my finger on it like a strange scent in the air and all that haze in the sunlight safety googles that resemble shades untill the daytime fades and I wonder... will mankind get his just reward making decisions for society the air we breath now poisons you and me.... there's something strange in the city don't stare too long into the shadows let loose now the reaper... he's after you and me mankind now beyond the point of no return somehow unable or unwilling to learn and we're just holding on too late now to even care 'bout who's who what's up or what clothes we wear too soon we learn life's regret quickly we see evil no angels appearing yet everywhere a tormented face spinning in circles through what man creates building fortresses hiding inside militant city rights taken from me graduallly..... man controls man with no right to judge me sheddng tears I know are selfish I am crying for the human race enter in my number for I have no face gradual control process now put into place land of the free they promised you and me look around now it seems things have changed somehow no longer have a right to be free... it's time now.... and all things have come to be...... Julie :) |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
The stark realities of what you have penned cry out to the reader...the cries have been audible for years, but no one seems to listen. It is words like yours that will open eyes, and I admire this writing from you in many ways! Excellent!! Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Oh gosh, I couldn't agree with the sad but true fact more. Everyone is being governed by some kind of superiority or inferiority, and now we feel as if we never have freedom. We are one nation in the hands of God, but yet, the Light is clouded by injustice. Oh JulieAnn, I pray that the future brings new love and hope into all, and freedom in speech and in heart. You have such a beautiful heart, dear friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Don't you just love your "unique" freedoms? I think we have all felt that way at one time or another, and we have come away thanking God that we live in the USA and have the right to say exactly what we feel. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Such injustice in our world, only love can heal our pain. Thanks for sharing this awesome piece! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
excellent Julie. . . wonderful words. . . nice to see you back. . .  ---------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Thank you all, I am glad to be back to the forums...And after 6 years overseas the states just don't seem the same as they were when I leftI guess you don't notice it changing so much when you live here that is why I call it gradual....anyway, glad you all liked it enough to respond!!! Peace please!!! bye 4 now, J :@) Julie :) |
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