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Cerenity
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0 posted 2001-04-08 02:24 AM



Winter Fades To Spring


Winter’s coat on mountains beam
Tipped with livid ashen scheme
Death of wintry solstice vowing
Vernal seasons theme to arousing

Fleshy leaves and pretty blossoms
Embark upon own wondrous rhythm
Circular motion; to flawless chime
Announces the arrival of springtime

God’s earthly creatures arrive anew
Give pure testimony unto
Prospects promised of fresh season
Assuring springtime’s trusty beacon

The mind affords rebirth as well
Chance to change the human will
All things can begin fresh new start
Why not share some of your heart

With creation of season due
Comes magnificent of colored hues
Giving triumph over all
Sequenced seasons that befall  


Saying goodbye to winters obscurity
Shedding veil of earthen blight
Springtime brings tranquillity
Blessing earth with pure delight


By, Cerenity






"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)


[This message has been edited by Cerenity (edited 04-08-2001).]

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nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2001-04-08 02:56 AM


The mind affords rebirth as well
Chance to change the human will
All things can begin fresh new start
Why not share some of your heart

very nicely done...maybe I should fade into another name..call myself

Spring Bliss...*just kidding...I liked...huggzzz

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



tracie66
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2 posted 2001-04-08 04:09 AM


Cerenity
Wonderful writings....well penned  
~HUGS~
Tracie~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Butterflies_dont_cry
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3 posted 2001-04-08 07:21 AM


This is so beautiful Miss Cerenity...
the cadence and imagery in this are
awesome.  A piece I could walk through
barefoot over and over again.  Fantastic
writing~

Sunshine
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4 posted 2001-04-08 10:28 AM


Cerenity!  A beauteous wonder!
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5 posted 2001-04-08 01:07 PM


Cerenity~
And a fresh breath of Spring is just what you are !

'Assuring springtime’s trusty beacon'

So reassuring to know that it comes just when we need it most.
Thanks for this beautiful write.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Sunnyone
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6 posted 2001-04-09 05:51 AM


This is so wonderful, Cerenity.....it feels so nice and warm and fresh.....just like Spring!  I'm so glad that Winter is gone!

Live...Love...Be grateful for both!!
  
    


Kit McCallum
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7 posted 2001-04-09 07:35 AM


"The mind affords rebirth as well
Chance to change the human will
All things can begin fresh new start
Why not share some of your heart"

Wonderful Cerenity ... full of inspirational thoughts and sentiments at this lovely time of year, I really enjoyed this beautiful springtime treasure!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Cerenity
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8 posted 2001-04-09 08:53 AM


Good morning everyone,

Thank you so much for your kind replys, I too am so glad winter is coming to an end, I'm up to my chin in yard work but at the moment I am enjoying it, once again thank you,

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



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9 posted 2001-04-09 07:10 PM


ah yes. . . I for one. . . am ready. . .

thank you Cerenity. . .  

-----------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Saunni
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10 posted 2001-04-09 07:39 PM


this is so beautiful! I enjoyed this very much.  

Sauni

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

Lone Wolf
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11 posted 2001-04-09 07:41 PM


I say bring on the flowers!!!  Very nice portrait of the seasons evolving.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Cerenity
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12 posted 2001-04-11 09:22 AM


Hi
Sven, Saunni, Lone Wolf

Thank you so much for stopping by and your kind replys,

Love, Cerenity

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13 posted 2001-04-11 06:44 PM


Hi, its a nice time of year, isn't it. Finally coming to NH too, though I still wish I was there  
Very pretty poem.
Sandra

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