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HM3
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0 posted 2001-04-07 05:57 PM


Crackers
(Companion piece to Dear Diary, Crackers In My Pocket)

With crackers in my pocket, walking on the shore
A black crow flies overhead crying, "Never more!"

Drawn to the doubt I offer  crackers as he flies
Seagulls answer echoes, "Don't feed the alibi!"

The black bird looks directly, deep into my eyes
Seems to grin at my chagrin, knowing my demise

I stumble falling hard within a pool of doubt
And shivering in the wind that blows me about

Why do I feed you black bird, time and time again
To rise and fall thru it all, farther from a friend


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[This message has been edited by HM3 (edited 04-07-2001).]

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nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2001-04-07 06:11 PM


enjoyed the couplets..now I have to go find your Diary and read it *s

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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2 posted 2001-04-07 06:13 PM


Hey,

      This is cool poem keep it up

    -- Linc

"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment."

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