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Dark Poetry #3

Her Falling

Hellseyes
Member

since 2001-07-25

Posts 120
Kansas, USA

0 posted 2001-07-25 07:53 PM

I'm really sorry to have to delete your first post but as I explained in the email I sent, poems that glorify suicide simply aren't acceptable in passions.

Please read the link I sent you with the email so this won't inconvenience you again.

Thanks, Severn

qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

1 posted 2001-07-25 08:14 PM

Wow great 1st post--I can feel this poem

Welcome to DP & i hope to see more from u soon LOVE ELMO <3

Dark Poet
Member

since 2001-07-22

Posts 99
North Carolina, USA

2 posted 2001-07-25 08:19 PM

still, cold, hurting.....this poem is full of pain of the heart. I could feel every word.

James

DarkenedShadow
Member

since 2001-07-23

Posts 114
Kansas

3 posted 2001-07-25 08:20 PM

Ohh it seems that I'm not the first Hellseyes but I see that I probaly won't be the last... you know that I like this one. You do have power in your words and just wait till you know who sees this. Keep it up and welcome to our world... catch ya' in the funny papers /Nick/

Hellseyes
Member

since 2001-07-25

Posts 120
Kansas, USA

4 posted 2001-07-25 08:21 PM

thanks for the welcome and thanks for the replys.../Drew/

Rebelious
Member

since 2001-05-27

Posts 57
Kansas, USA

5 posted 2001-07-26 01:59 AM

Never thought I would see this from you... Great poem... wish I would of known about your writeings sooner. Tonight is not to good of a night for me and I think this poem put me into more of a shamp... well nice write./dustin/

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