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Dark Poetry #3

Missing You

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

0 posted 2001-07-25 02:37 PM

I'm missing you,
but you're not gone,
you're still here w/ me.

I'm missing you,
missing the way we were,
the way we still are.

I'm missing you,
but you didn't leave,
I'm the one who left.

I'm missing you,
and it's my fault,
I screw up everything.

I'm missing you,
when I wake up alone,
without you by my side.

I'm missing you,
when you're not home,
and I called to just say hey.

I'm missing you,
b/c I'm the screw up,
it's always been that way.

I'm missing you,
and I know you know,
but do you miss me?

Someone once taught me that it doesn't matter what other people think of you as long as you like yourself. That's what I live by.

DarkenedShadow
Member

since 2001-07-23

Posts 114
Kansas

1 posted 2001-07-25 04:19 PM

If this is as personal as I took it then, I'm sure you're not to blame. This poem brings thoughts of somebody I know and they usualy feel the same way. I liked reading this... but hey its alright don't bash yourself. /Nick/

Dark Poet
Member

since 2001-07-22

Posts 99
North Carolina, USA

2 posted 2001-07-25 08:10 PM

Very nice indeed. Thank you for sharing, I enjoyed reading and your feelings came across beautifully.

James

Hellseyes
Member

since 2001-07-25

Posts 120
Kansas, USA

3 posted 2001-07-25 08:45 PM

that peice went straight to the heart....
i love seeing your work../Drew/

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