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Dark Poetry #3

Fading

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

0 posted 2001-07-25 02:43 PM

Memories
flood my mind
flood my heart
rip me up.

Things
I didn't see
I wasn't there
they don't fade.

Times
of sorrow
of hate
of mourning.

Fading
I see her scream
see her cry
see her bleed.

Hatered
is a terrible thing
it will eat you up
if you let it.

Loneliness
he took her away
he ended her life
I hate him.

Times
of laughter
of playing jokes
all lost.

Fading
now she is gone
he took her away
and her memory's fading.

in memory of Jesica A. Young.

Someone once taught me that it doesn't matter what other people think of you as long as you like yourself. That's what I live by.

DarkenedShadow
Member

since 2001-07-23

Posts 114
Kansas

1 posted 2001-07-25 04:16 PM

Wow the power here was amazing and the way it seemed that without the part of hatred... it wouldn't seem so complete but thats my thought. /Nick/

Dark Poet
Member

since 2001-07-22

Posts 99
North Carolina, USA

2 posted 2001-07-25 08:07 PM

This is a wonderful poem. I love it. The images are so vivid in each stanza.

James

Hellseyes
Member

since 2001-07-25

Posts 120
Kansas, USA

3 posted 2001-07-25 08:13 PM

thats very kool, nad to tip it all off it was dedicated to someone...nick shut the hell up./Drew/

Neala
Member

since 1999-08-21

Posts 262
Florida, USA

4 posted 2001-07-26 11:34 AM

I liked the way it went from stanza to stanza very good job.
-Neala

Jessica

Member

since 2001-06-28

Posts 350
South AL

5 posted 2001-07-31 03:33 AM

Alyssa ~ Another awesome tribute to Jesica. *hugs*

What don't kill you can only make you stronger...

Love you, Adam!! :)

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