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allis4angel Member
since 2001-04-10
Posts 82Portugal |
In this chapter of my life Many pages are still left blank Waiting for the words You could write but you don’t Sometimes I use a pencil To write feelings I try to guess Choosing nice words I always have to rub out It has no title yet I wish it could be “Finally together” But those empty pages tell me It will be “Impossible Mission” Your name is right there In those sad white pages Under the tears I drop each time Your acts contradict my words I can’t shred them ‘Cause those unwritten pages They are about my worst pains But also about my best dream So here I stay living each day Converting wishes in words While leaving all the hopes In those pages witch words I can’t see |
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DarkenedShadow Member
since 2001-07-23
Posts 114Kansas |
I'm touched and vivdly sound when it comes to this poem. Each stanza has its own life and its incredible to see this, it brings sooo much meaning to the words you are trying to say... this helps to encoruage deeper writing on my part. Thank you for this experience. /Nick/ |
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Dark Kisses Member
since 2001-06-24
Posts 364Flat lands of Kansas |
Very nice read here. It was so different, I truely enjoyed it. Thanx, Mags |
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allis4angel Member
since 2001-04-10
Posts 82Portugal |
Thank you DarkenedShadow and Dark Kisses. I feel very happy you enjoyed it. |
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Hellseyes Member
since 2001-07-25
Posts 120Kansas, USA |
this is da [edit]...good write.../Drew/ [This message has been edited by Severn (edited 07-26-2001).] |
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Jessica
since 2001-06-28
Posts 350South AL |
Very vivid... I liked this. I can't wait to see your next post.  What don't kill you can only make you stronger... |
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