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Ebon Heart Waltz
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Ebon Heart Waltz |
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Dark Poet Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 99North Carolina, USA 
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Ebon Heart Waltz Copyright 2001 Written by James Edward Shields Rip these nails Right through you Carve a new image Canvas to dine And soul will feed This tightened grip Show how I love you Open thorned gates Step inside! Parting red my flu Step inside you Fill that which you lack And feed my soul.... Nails up inside Around blackened heart I can taste it Taste you I’ll consume you To death I will love... Burn with you With me Seduced in this sea To death I will love you Make you hunger Torture you with it Driving you mad Till I come for you Satisfy your tongue Devour your soul To death I will love you Pull you close And to death I will love you http://warlord.topcities.com |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
hmmmm....not sure exactly how ro respond to this piece. There is a lot of power in each stanza. This is so very dark. The love in this piece sounds more threatening then anything. You accomplished it very well. Marilyn. |
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DarkenedShadow Member
since 2001-07-23
Posts 114Kansas |
This one really pops out at you when you read it, the strength in the words are incredible and nicely put at that. Great work... /Nick/ |
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Dark Poet Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 99North Carolina, USA |
Thank you for the responses. They are appreciated. James |
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Hellseyes Member
since 2001-07-25
Posts 120Kansas, USA |
i really liked the way you spoke this piece, and i loved the darkness to it../Drew/ |
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Jessica
since 2001-06-28
Posts 350South AL |
the darkness is incredible...  |
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