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K2001
Junior Member
since 2001-01-19
Posts 31
Near manchester in England

0 posted 2001-07-12 08:52 PM



Somewhere she cries, no one knows why.
Inside she dies, she wants to fly.
Freedom is far, shes scared to lose.
Never asked, no chance to choose.

Shes so alone in the world, afraid.
Of the wounds inside, the ones he made.
Scars so deep, theyre hard to find.
Secrets so cruel theyre locked in her mind.

Where does she go?
What will she do?
Will she tell them?
Anyone? You?

"Keep the faith"-Jon Bon Jovi

© Copyright 2001 K.J.Hilton - All Rights Reserved
Suetang
Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
1 posted 2001-07-12 09:55 PM


So hauntingly sad.  I hope someone was there to listen?  Take care......Sue

Suetang

Ginners
Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339
Mullica Hill, New Jersey
2 posted 2001-07-12 10:59 PM


ok seriously this has gotten weird,  you have shared so many of the same things i have.  it is so sad to know someone else has the same feelings, and somehow comforting to know that i am not alone--and neither are you.
JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2001-07-13 05:04 AM


This is a good clear expression of your feelings...James
qtpieelmo
Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
4 posted 2001-07-13 09:28 AM


Yea for soo long I prayed that i would no longer be alone in all this, but now that i'm hearing about everyone with the same experiences as me, I pray that no more will have to go through all this! LOVE ELMOIE <3
LadyPeach1
Member
since 2001-06-04
Posts 282

5 posted 2001-07-13 01:56 PM


What a sad poem  
It was very beautifully written though.  you did a wonderful job expressing your feelings.

LadyPeach1

Jeen
Member
since 2000-06-07
Posts 91

6 posted 2001-07-13 10:36 PM


This is a great poem.  It strikes a chord in those of us who know.

Jeen

K2001
Junior Member
since 2001-01-19
Posts 31
Near manchester in England
7 posted 2001-07-15 09:17 AM


Thanx evry1
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