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Familiar Knock
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Familiar Knock |
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Phreak Junior Member
since 2001-04-11
Posts 26 |
I hear temptation outside again He pounds my heart my door tonight I fear that I will lose again My soul this battle that we fight Truth in his lies his hands his eyes His mouth I cannot resist I tell him to go and never come back But I cannot refuse fate’s kiss Why do you come here, my love? What is it you want from me? Her body was enough I thought.. Please go just let me be I am tired and you’ve stayed too long My jeans my heart are torn I cannot hardly breath right now My patience you have worn Before you leave again, my dear, I have one last request to make Remember your coat…but not my heart That isn’t yours to take |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Cynical last lines there Phreak - like them...  KI am a refugee of logic...insisting |
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Dark Kisses Member
since 2001-06-24
Posts 364Flat lands of Kansas |
Nice ending to a long and sad battle! Touching read.  Mags Don't fear your tears! |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
hmm - sounds like a recurring battle - cynical doesn't fit ya PHREAK. C  (K - I like your new siggy!) |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Loved it! The last couple of lines finished it off superbly! Take care.may you live all the days of your life. -- jonathan swift |
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