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Xeonox
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0 posted 2001-05-26 04:12 PM


The crimson walls,


Surround me with familiar faces,


Leaving my mouth tasteless,


Of what I had the pleasure of,


Today the images appear once again,

My muse sets up this reality,

In an instance words are utter,

Changes the way I look at the faces,

The colors in this rainbow,

Are blinded by the distinction,

In it I sought asylum,

No inspiration of likeness exists.



Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

[This message has been edited by Xeonox (edited 05-26-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
dragonpoe
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1 posted 2001-05-26 09:22 PM


A very interesting piece. I had to read it twice, and both times I got the same undescribable feeling of inner realization.  Got me to thinking, I like it.

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe

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