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0 posted 2001-05-22 01:33 AM


Caring is an easy process,
Just open up your heart,
Letting it go is impossible,
For I have expectations,
I sense no human at the other end.


© Copyright 2001 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-05-22 05:55 AM


Nice Xeonox..very nice - rhythm, word choice...it fits together well

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2 posted 2001-05-23 12:09 PM


lately my dark side has not been that dark.

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

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3 posted 2001-05-23 02:54 AM


I don't think there are any probs with that happening sometimes  

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4 posted 2001-05-25 11:54 PM


someone once told me that if you have no expectations then you can have no regrets...

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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