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Love is Moot.
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Love is Moot. |
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BitterSmoke Member
since 2001-01-02
Posts 54 |
The woman I have loved silently for six long years- she sleeps now with her boyfriend, and I sit alone in my empty room, guilty of laying another man's woman. Forever a dream Now a reality of the past Forever a dream Now separated into lust and ash Love has melted Salvation lies hidden Love ain't free Free-love has a painful cost Love ain't free Free-love is merely love lost True love conquered by a single crass night of salvation |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Love ain't free Free-love has a painful cost Love ain't free Free-love is merely love lost some times no matter what your feeling are things just were not meant to be but that hardly helps. powerful words well penned. I would advise moving one if it is meant to be it is meant to be. Take care "across the unfair divide |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
Strong write, I could definately feel the pain and anguish in this one. With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
yes, strong and powerful feelings here....and maybe a lesson somewhere too ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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allis4angel Member
since 2001-04-10
Posts 82Portugal |
Somedays ago I didn't (want to) understood this poem. Today I do and I must say, it's great. Thanks for sharing and for the advice. |
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angelbear Member
since 2001-05-22
Posts 139North East, USA |
Wonderful poem..says much. I liked the syle written too. I can't control |
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