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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2001-04-10 07:21 PM


Wasted Days and Wasted Nights

If she was really interested she'd be calling on the phone
and bugging you to spend time together.
She'd be all over the place.
She'd be right in your face.
She'd give you a great big thrill.
I don't see her doing any of those things.
Is she now?
So get over it.
Life was not created for what if's and wanna be's.
It was designed to be lived every day.
Each day spent whining over missed possibilities
is a day you may miss your golden opportunity.
Linger not in one place to long.
New adventures are provided for those who move on.
Can you even recall the last time she called?
Neither can she and she's probably moved to New Zealand
and found a new boyfriend.
And your only response is to slip into a pity trip
and make yourself ill wasting time waiting for another big thrill.

Jameslee@April10,2001

[This message has been edited by JamesMichael (edited 04-10-2001).]

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Xeonox
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1 posted 2001-04-11 01:50 AM


Of the bat, this sounds like something your or someone you know has been through. I understand where you are going with this poetry. Good job in expression emotions.

Ronil (Inspiration for my poems is all around me for my muse is my reality.)

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2 posted 2001-04-14 05:49 PM


this reminds me of a song James. . .

it's time to let go. . . I know that it's hard. . .but you have to. . .

excellent words. . .

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JamesMichael
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3 posted 2001-04-18 10:56 AM


Thank you Xeonox and Sven...I suppose I will let go when I am able...James
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