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You are the biggest piece of me
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You are the biggest piece of me |
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Temptress*Moon Member
since 2001-01-15
Posts 240Long Island, NY |
You are the magic that surrounds me Throughout my days The one that planted the seed, to make my newly life grow You are the lingering scent that cascades through the air of the candle i light in memory of our love You are my heart, in which you have mended from the battles of lost loves before The piece of me, which i thought i have lost so very long ago You are the dreams that come to me when i fall asleep Watching peacefully over me, protecting me from harm You are the happiness that floats within Something i haven't felt for eternity You are my love, my life, my soul my best friend I will always love you, even after my days here are gone Danyel L. Azar 3/22/01 *Dedicated to my kindred spirit* I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH- [This message has been edited by Temptress*Moon (edited 03-22-2001).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Temptress Moon, you are a poet at heart. write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"You are the lingering scent that cascades thru the air."...very nice...James |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Very very nice TM... some lovely imagery in here...  K |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Great imagery, Temptress. Very nicely done. --Marie I never thought that you would ever be the one to let me down. I guess that just goes to show how wrong I always am. |
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Temptress*Moon Member
since 2001-01-15
Posts 240Long Island, NY |
Thank you everyone for reading*S* It is wonderful to be able to share what i wright with a bunch of great people*S* ~Hugs~ Temptress*Moon
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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
Temp- this was so good and sweet -Gin  "I'll build a wall if we can keep them on the other side"---NIN |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
You are the magic that surrounds me Throughout my days The one that planted the seed, to make my newly life grow beautiful! Maree  |
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Zyell Member
since 2000-07-28
Posts 121USA |
kindred spirits, life would be much less colorful without our dreams, and love! well done~! *S* Z |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Wonderful piece!! I feel like this about someone...it's an odd but exhilerating feeling...hehe I look forward to more. Jenn "I've come too close to happiness, to have it swept away,don't think I can take the pain, never fall again..." Janet |
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Captivating1 Junior Member
since 2001-06-07
Posts 15Houston, TX |
Simply Beautiful... |
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