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liqwidnik
Junior Member
since 2000-11-04
Posts 33
Mantua, NJ, USA

0 posted 2001-02-27 03:47 PM


*This is dedicated to Gin one of the best friends I had even if it was just for a short while She's been through a lot and I just want her to know that I'm still and always will be here for her*
Friends are gone
Their friendships have been lost
Imiss them
Those people
The comfort they offered
Now is the time for me to return that
The comfort and friendship
Unfortunately they don't want it
When the time is right
those friends may return
for now I just sit and wait
for those friendships that were lost
for the day they will return




Don't tell me that you love me unless you mean it cuz I might do something crazy like believe you.

© Copyright 2001 Nicole Novak - All Rights Reserved
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 2001-02-27 06:27 PM


Nice work Nicole!! But don't sit and wait, or your friend shouldn't either, there are always new friends and loves to be made, everyday you/or she sit you lose a possibility...
Isis


*War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!*
~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit.



mystic requiem
Member
since 2001-01-26
Posts 144

2 posted 2001-02-27 07:21 PM


I wish you the best in all things.
Good poem!!
*thanx*


Jeremy Redinger
Junior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 46

3 posted 2001-02-28 12:12 PM


It hurts when someone you care about is going through 'rough times', and it hurts even more when there's nothing you can do to help. Your poem was wonderful, both in the way it made me feel inside, and in how sincere it is. I wish you, and your friend luck. Keep writing poetry too I'm definately going to keep reading
liqwidnik
Junior Member
since 2000-11-04
Posts 33
Mantua, NJ, USA
4 posted 2001-02-28 03:21 PM


Thank you guys all for replying I appreciate all the comments, and stuff thanks again!

Don't tell me that you love me unless you mean it cuz I might do something crazy like believe you.

Temptress*Moon
Member
since 2001-01-15
Posts 240
Long Island, NY
5 posted 2001-03-01 06:36 PM


This was a nice dedication*S*
Great job!
temptress*Moon



I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH-

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